Help with this song please?

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Numb

(Spoken Intro)
When I was young,
Things were always right,
but as i grow up,
I realize the lies.
I see the fight,
Taking place between my inner self
and my outer life.
The battle has begun and
It makes me feel forever numb.

(Singing)(chorus)
I feel numb (numb)
Resistant to your love (love)
Rejecting lies from above (hey!)
Pushing away the faith
Running toward,
my own created fate.

(softer singing)
It hit me
Like a bullet hitting bone
That I was better of alone.
The only thing you ever made
Is everything that is fake.

(Bridge)

To you I am...numb (numb!)
Resistant to your love (love!)
Rejecting lies from above (hey!)
Pushing away the faith
Running toward,
my own created fate.

I found out
Freedom isn't in your book
Look at all the lives you took.
I don't believe anymore
Why don't you come down and settle the score?!?

(Epic Solo)

I feel numb (numb!)
Resistant to your love (love!)
Rejecting lies from above (hey!)
Pushing away the faith
Running toward,
my own created fate.

I feel numb (numb!)
Resistant to your love (love!)
Rejecting lies from above (hey!)
Pushing away the faith
Running toward,
my own created fate.

(Spoken outro)
My heart can beat without you
Life goes on today as planned.
I wont return to you,
I'm happy among your so called damned.


Heavy song that would go with the type of beat you would hear from like Rise Against or heavy Sum 41

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